人的记忆力会随着岁月的流逝而衰退，写作可以弥补记忆的不足，将曾经的人生经历和感悟记录下来，也便于保存一份美好的回忆。范文书写有哪些要求呢？我们怎样才能写好一篇范文呢？以下是我为大家搜集的优质范文，仅供参考，一起来看看吧

大学英语四六级类型篇一

一.四六级作文测试基本要求及分析 1． 四级考试写作要求：

《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语课程教学基本要求》都对培养学生的英语写作能力做了明确规定，即学生能在半小时内完成120字左右的短文，包括书信等应用问题写作，要求文理基本通顺，表达思想清楚，无重大语法错误。通过分析历年的真题，我们不难发现：英语作文考查的类型基本包括议论文(一般为三段论式的论说文字)，说明文(目前侧重于这方面的写作训练)，图表作文(要求描述性的语言要贴近图表信息，真实反映语言水平)和应用文写作(包括书信、便条、通知、海报

等)。2．近年四级写作改革变化追踪 2005．6

in honour of teachers on the occasion of teacher’s day（演讲致辞型）2005．12

should the university campus be open to tourists?（议论文）

2006．6

an announcement for a voluntary program（应用文）

2006．1cctv spring festival gala（议论文）

2007．6

should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?（议论文）2007．12

elective courses to choose（议论文）

2008．6

recreational activities（议论文）

从上面的题目变化趋势看，描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四、六级考试写作部分主要考查的重点，在今后相当长的时间内，英语写作教学和辅导的主要突破口应集中在说明文、议论文和应用文上

此外，仔细研究06年6月24日以后的四级试卷，我们还可发现，新四级的写作题目与校园生活密切相关，学生普遍感觉亲切，体裁包括两篇议论文，一篇应用文。不仅如此，新四级写作题中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比较明确，绝大多数考生都能利用“经典句型”或“万能模板”写出及格的作文。尽管新四级前两次都考查了议论文，但这并不能说明写作的重心有任何偏移。根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定，应用文写作、说明文和议论文仍将是新四级作文的主

攻方向。3．时间配置：

30分钟

1）审题（3分钟）： 2）写作（25分钟）： 3）检查（2分钟）：语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点

4．具体要求：

1）语言第一位：表达通顺、无重大语言错误

（1）基础一般：简单原则、安全

第一（“平淡如水”、“简洁就是美”、“绚烂之极，归于平淡“，“与其写一个错误的复杂句，不

如写一个正确的简单句。”（2）基础较好：句子结构词多变 2）结构第二位：（1）逻辑性：

a.并列：and/or/but b.因果：because/in that, since/as, for c.转折：but/however（2）关联词：

3）内容第三位

二．四级写作高分策略

新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求，但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整：写作作为第一项考查的内容，被提到新四级试卷的最开头，这令许多考生感觉不适应，部分网友甚至认为这是在折腾考生。其实，提高写作能力虽然较难，但写作教学却是一片大有可为的沃土。在过去十多年的英语写作辅导中，笔者坚持认为：考生如果坚持做到如下几点，就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。1．制造语言亮点

a.尝试使用中高级词汇替代低级词汇（主要是形容词和副词）

good results-----favorable results bad effects-------negative effects big changes------great changes;

(data)show that-----indicate;demonstrate important--------significant;crucial;vital more and more(problems等名词)-------an increasing number of(problems)

more and more(important等形容词或副词)-------increasingly(important)all kinds of--------a variety of many-----------a number of deal with-------tackle

possible--------likely(可用人或讨论的问题做主语)b．英语四六级考试写作30个最经典替换词 duals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

inspaniduals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter替换thing 8: shared代 common huge fruits替换get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective替换 in my opinion 11:increasing(ly),growing替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词， has gained growing r with the advancement of if anything,或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, r,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer ingly,extremely, intensely替换very necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb take interest in / interested in e one's attention替换attract one's ,demension,sphere代aspect indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear rise to, lead to, result in, are several reasons behind sth替换..reasons for sth attention into替换pay attention to in mind that替换remember , possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)ction替换communication on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible c.几个不能随意使用的词

“good”,”bad”,”terrible”,”something”这几个词在学生作文中反复出现。这几个词本身并没有问题，是英语常用词，但是，很多情况下，应该使用意义更准确的词。学生使用这几个词是因为懒惰，词汇量贫乏或者是缺乏修改。

四、六级作文要求的字数很少，一个意思只能用一个句子表达，句子里的关键词就要力求准确。good 原稿： sports are definitely good for mental health.改后稿： sports are beneficial to one’s mental health.原稿： travelers can meet with people form other parts of the world and may develop a good relationship.改后稿： travelers are able to make friends with people all over the 原稿：some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health.改后稿： fake goods can be dangerous to one’s le

原稿：nowadays, the city has a lot of problems, terrible traffic, polluted air, too much noises, etc.改后稿： today, many cities suffer from traffic congestion and air and noise ing 原稿： there is something more important and that money can’t buy, for example, love.改后稿： there are more important things than money such as love.原稿：it means that people can master something perfectly by practicing it.改后稿：the meaning is that with constant practice, you can master what you set out to.2.捕获闪光词

基本表达(basic elements of english writing)：

越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that 许多问题：a host of/a number of problems 引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken the fact/danger 适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change 接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems 接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society 获得成功：achieve/accomplish success 提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions 作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work 产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on 较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one's life 剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity 取代旧的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way 采取措施：take effective steps/measures to 控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment 躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge 满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of 补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage 解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon 对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective e/gain an insight into 把某因素考虑进去：take account(consideration), give much thought to 品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth 培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in 经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience 表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image 生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice 追求学习/职业：pursue one's academic interest/professional career 学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill 被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example 交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 发挥/起到重要作用：play an(important/active/great)role/part 逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture 知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience 确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard 到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective 克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty 面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty 阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth 阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of 持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom 发表看法：voice/express one's opinion 持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view 揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of 求得帮助：enlist one's support/help 缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to 对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to 施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on 重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to 强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on 把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon 提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity 得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information 有可能：there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that 展开竞争：compete against/with the prize/position/control/the mastery of 开展运动：conduct(carry on/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me 带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career 大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no)difference 真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …

改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life 建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice 进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment 辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one's job/work/school 参加考试/竞赛等：enter(for)the examination/contest, race 参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion 影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude 进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension 提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership 提高技术/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability 加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of 随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society 开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of 有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards)solving the problem 迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune 把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机会/技术：make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent 把知识/经验运用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use 取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in 充分发挥潜力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion fo

大学英语四六级类型篇二

英语四六级：段落翻译

1、狮舞（lion dance）是中国最广为流传的民间舞蹈之一。狮为百兽之首，在中国传统中，狮子被视为是能带来好运的吉祥物（mascot）。古人将狮子视作是勇敢和力量的化身，能驱赶邪恶、保护人类。据记载，狮舞已拥有了2,000多年的历史。在唐代（the tang dynasty），狮舞就已经被引入了皇室。因此，舞狮成为元宵节（the lantern festival）和其他节日的习俗，人们以此来祈祷好运、平安和幸福。

2、中国将进一步发展经济、扩大开放，这对海外企业（enterprises）意味着更多的商机。改革开放以来，中国企业与海外企业一直积极开展经济技术合作，并取得了巨大成就。海外企业不仅帮助了中国企业的成长，而且也在合作中获得了收益。中国政府将继续提供有利的政策和条件，推动中国企业与国外企业进一步开展合作。

3、假日经济的现象表明：中国消费者的消费观正在发生巨大变化。根据统计数据，中国消费者的消费需求正在从基本生活必需品转向对休闲、舒适和个人发展的需求。同时，中国人的消费观在蓬勃发展的假日经济中正变得成熟。因此产品结构应做相应调整，来适应社会的发展。另一方面，服务质量要改善，以满足人们提高生活质量的要求。

4、端午节，又叫龙舟节，是为了纪念爱国诗人屈原。屈原是一位忠诚和受人敬仰的大臣（minister）,他给国家带来了和平和繁荣。但最后因为受到诽谤（vilify）而最终投河自尽。人们撑船到他自尽的地方，抛下粽子，希望鱼儿吃粽子，不要吃屈原的身躯。几千年来，端午节的特色在于吃粽子（glutinous dumplings）和赛龙舟，尤其是在一些河湖密布的南方省份。5、2013年6月20日在中国各地，剧估计60万儿童和他们的老师观看了有宇航员（astronaut）王亚平在距离地球300公里的上空所讲授的科学课。王亚平与两个同事乘坐天宫一号实验舱(theophany-1 laboratory module)执行为期两周的任务。她在课上进行了一系列太空的物理演示。在有些演示中还对比了在地球上重力（one-gravity）环境下同样的实验。这堂物理课不仅让孩子们享受了一堂知识与乐趣兼具的物理课，也显示了我国通信科技的前进。

6、朝气蓬勃，充满活力，丰富多彩的上海是现代中国的缩影。虽然上海的文化遗迹不能与北京媲美，但是上海迷人的城市风貌，风格各异的万国建筑为这座城市注入了无限的魅力。今日之上海，已经成为享誉中外的国际大都市。漫步在这座日新月异的现代大都市里，你会发现许多精彩的历史亮点，隐现在众多摩天大楼背后的是上海发展变化的轨迹。它们记述了上海自十九世纪末开埠以来，尤其是新中国成立以后，是如何迅猛发展的。

7、近代以来，亚洲经历了曲折和艰难的发展历程。亚洲人们为改变自己的命运，始终以不屈的意志和艰辛的奋斗开辟前进道路。今天，人们所看到的亚洲发展成就，是勤劳智慧的亚洲人民不屈不挠、锲而不舍奋斗的结果。亚洲人民深知，世界上没有放之四海而皆准的发展模式，也没有一成不变的发展道路，亚洲人民勇于变革创新，不断开拓进取，探索和开辟适应时代潮流，符合自身实际的发展道路，为经济社会发展打开了广阔前景。

8、吸烟之危害，可谓大矣，其严重性是不能低估的。吸烟污染空气，损害健康，使肺癌发病率大大增加。为了使各国人民关注烟草的盛行及预防吸烟导致的疾病和死亡，世界卫生组织已将每年的5月31日定为“世界无烟日”。瘾君子们说，一天饭不吃可以，一个时辰不抽烟就难捱了，不能戒。只要真正意识到吸烟有百害而无一利，于人于己都是一种祸害，就有可能下决心摆脱烟草的诱惑。戒烟贵在坚持，坚持下去就是收获。

9、越来越多受英文教育的海外华人父母，已经认识到孩子在掌握不可或缺的英文的同时，也通晓中文的重要性。中国的崛起，让他们充分认识到孩子掌握双语的好处——既能增加他们的就业机会，也能让他们接触和熟悉东西方两种不同的文化。这些人对中文的态度几乎没有完全改变。曾几何时，他们还非常骄傲地宣称自己只懂英文。现在，他们已开始积极支持孩子学习中文和中国文化，而且还不时走访中国，欣赏壮观的自然风光，认识丰富的文化遗产。

10、我赞同许多东亚学者的观点，东方文明可以医治盛行于西方世界的一些顽疾。西方世界个人自由主义泛滥导致了极端个人主义、性关系混乱以及过度暴力行为，对此我们不能视而不见。// 相反，东方社会的自我约束力，集体责任感以及温厚儒雅的传统倒可以消除西方社会的许多恶疾。// 在这个信息时代，世界已缩小成一个地球村。这个地球村里，不再有什么泾渭分明的东方世界和西方世界，我们是生活在同一个社区里的邻里。// 因此，我们彼此之间无须冲突。我们之间的关系应该是一种友好合作，平等互补的关系。我们应该相互理解，相互学习，和睦共处。

11、国际贸易的基本原则是平等互利，各国追求各自的利益是正常的，出现一些摩擦和纠纷也是不可避免的。关键要以冷静而明智的态度正确对待和处理摩擦和纠纷。// 就中美贸易而言，互利共赢的经贸关系给两国人民带来了实实在在的经济利益。今天，美国在华投资设立的企业已超过4 万家，投资额达450 亿美元。// 美国500 强企业有400 多家进入中国，大多数企业获利丰厚。与此同时，在美国市场上，许多中国商品受到美国消费者的青睐。中国在美国投资设立的企业已超过1000 家。// 我们可以预见，中美贸易摩擦将随着经贸关系的深化而凸显，但是中美经贸合作的总体发展是不可逆转的。主要有两个原因，其一：中美贸易具有很大互补性。其二：中国产品具有明显的劳动力成本优势。//

12、中国国际出版集团是中国最大的、最权威的外语出版发行单位，其前身是中央人民政府新闻出版署国际新闻局。// 我集团坚持“让中国走向世界，让世界了解中国”的出版原则，全心致力于中国外语教育与研究事业的发展，全心致力于中外文化交流事业的拓展。// 为了加强对出版人才队伍的建设，为了满足日益增长的特殊出版业务的需要，我集团每年都要选派一些青年员工到国内外知名高等学府和研究机构进修，// 根据我们的发展战略，我们会将前进的步伐迈出国界走向世界，瞄准海外读者群，这一战略已取得了良好的开局。//

13、改革开放30 年来，随着中国逐渐崛起成为政治经济强国，海外人士学习汉语的现象与日俱增，海外孔子学院也成了人们学习中国语言和中国文化的首选之地。// 通过学习汉语，他们对这个和自己文化大相径庭的古老文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，而且有机会了解中国的哲学、艺术、医学、饮食文化，亲身体验这个文明古国的风采。// 作为第二文化，中国文化也丰富了他们的生活和世界观。可以说，这个潮流方兴未艾。越来越多的学习汉语的美国人除了对中国菜肴赞不绝口之外，也在尝试针灸，草药和武术。//他们也看功夫电影，学习东方时装潮流和手工艺，不知不觉的在日常生活中谈及中国的点心，人参、银杏，乌龙茶等。目前在美国最热门的中国文化是道家学说和有着神秘色彩的风水学。

14、上海菜系是中国最年轻的地方菜系，通常被成为“本帮菜”，有着400多年的历史。同中国其他菜系一样，“本帮菜”具有“色，香，味”三大要素。//上海菜的特点是注重调料的使用，食物的质地和菜的原汁原味。其中最著名的有特色点心“南翔小笼”和特色菜“松鼠鲑鱼”。//“南翔小笼”是猪肉馅，个小味美，皮薄汁醇。“松鼠鲑鱼”色泽黄亮，形如松鼠，外皮脆而内肉嫩，汤汁酸甜适口。//在品尝过“松鼠鲑鱼”之后，我们常常惊讶于“松鼠”的形状，觉得在三大评价标准上在添加“形”这个标准才更合适。//

15、美国人强调效率、竞争和独创性，而中国人则将严谨规划放在首位，鼓励团队成员之间的密切合作和无私奉献。//在美国学校，讨论享有至高无上的地位，讨论是课堂教学的主旋律；而中国教师喜欢讲课，喜欢考试，编写千篇一律的标准教案，培养整齐划一的高材生。//美国人的政治观，经济观以及社会观的核心是个人道德自治观。中国传统的思想体系是以儒家学说为基础的，这种思想强调整体和谐。//现在，中美联系比以往更加紧密，中国人学英语，玩保龄球，吃肯德基，美国人学汉语，练功夫，吃北京烤鸭，《泰坦尼克》驶进中国，《牡丹亭》也在百老汇上演。//

16、武术在我国源远流长，是中华民族传统文化的瑰宝。我们知道，一个民族的优秀文化遗产，不仅仅属于一个民族，它会逐渐传播到世界而成为人类的共同财富。// 为了更好的推广武术运动，使其与奥运项目接轨，中国武协和国际武联做了大量的艰苦卓绝的工作。现在武术运动已被列为一种具有与保龄球运动和国际标准舞同等地位的奥运表演项目。//武术的蓬勃发展，除得益于其项目本身的吸引力之外，早期移居海外的一代武术大师功不可没。//老一代武术家在海外播种下了武术的种子，使武术这门既可以自卫又可以健身的运动很快就在新的土地上扎下了根。今天高超的武术大师已遍布世界各地，武术爱好者也与日俱增。//

17、香港中文大学，简称“中大”，成立于1963年。中大是一所研究型综合大学，以“结合传统与现代，融汇中国与西方”为创校使命。//40多年来，中大一直致力于弘扬中华传统文化，坚持双语教育，并推行独特的书院制度，在香港教育界卓然而立。中大校园占地 134 公顷，是世界上最美丽的校园之一。//中大的师生来自世界各地。有教职员工 5200多人，近万名本科生、约2000多名研究生，其中约2500多人来自45个不同的国家和地区。//中大实行灵活的学分制，不仅有助于培养有专有博的人才，而且还赋予学生更大的学习自主权。中大的多元教育有助于充分发挥每一个学生的潜能。//

18、过去10年，海平面升高和森林看法的速度都是前所未有的；生态恶化、物种灭绝、臭氧层被破坏、温室效应、酸雨等一系列环境问题已经严重影响到人类的生存环境。// 环境恶化造成的问题之一就是缺水。目前全世界 40%以上的人口，即 20 多亿人，面临缺水问题。据预测，未来 25 年全球人口将有 60 亿增长到 80 亿，环境保护面临更大的压力。// 中国作为一个发展中国家，面临着发展经济和保护环境的双重任务。从国情出发，中国在全面推进现代化的过程中，将环境保护视为一项基本国策。// 众所周知，对生态环境和生物多样性的保护是环保工作的重点。我国野生动植物物种丰富，仅脊椎动物就有 6000 多种左右，高等植物 3 万多种。//

19、为了切实保护儿童权益，中国的立法、司法、政府各有关部门以及社会团体都建立了相应的机制，以监督、实施和促进保护儿童事业的健康发展。// 中国政府动员社会采取多种方式关心和帮助残疾儿童的成长，大力弘扬残疾儿童自强不息的精神，倡导团结、友爱、互助的道德风尚。// 中华民族素有“携幼”，“爱幼”的传统美德，中国古语“有无有以及人之幼”了流传至今。// 我们要在全社会倡导树立“爱护儿童、教育儿童、为儿童做表率、为儿童办实事”的公民意识，并努力为儿童事业的发展创造良好的社会条件。// 20、泰山的每个季节都有独特的魅力。春天，绿茵茵的山坡上，争奇斗妍的花朵到处可见。夏天泰山的雷暴雨堪称奇观。秋天，枫树叶漫山遍野，蔚蓝色的河水川流不息。冬天，雪盖群峰松披霜，景观素雅悲壮，别有一番情趣。喜逢艳阳日，极目远眺，重峦叠嶂，尽收眼帘。//但遇天阴时，环顾四周，苍茫大地，尽入云海。泰山的日出与日落，闻名遐尔。壮观的自然风景以及不可计数的历史名胜，激发了古代文人墨客，为之舞文弄墨，创作了无数经典 佳作。泰山历来是画家骚客所钟情的聚集地。//

21、中国是舞龙舞狮的起源地。自问世以来，舞龙、舞狮运动一直受到各个民族人民的喜爱，代代相传，长久不衰，并因此形成了灿烂的舞龙舞狮文化。长期以来，很多青年朋友都以为龙舞、狮舞就是春节、庙会、庆典时的喜庆表演，殊不知它历经了几千年的传承流变，积淀了深厚的历史文化，是祖先留给我们的极其宝贵的文化遗产。核心词提示：

舞龙：the dragon 舞狮：lion dance 春节：festivalgoer 庙会：festivalgoer fairs

22、旗袍，是中国女性的传统服装，源于中国满族女性的传统服装。因为满族人被称为“旗人”，所以满族人的长袍被称为“旗袍”。到了20世纪20年代，受西方服饰的影响，经过改进之后的旗袍逐渐在广大妇女中流行起来。在中国，很多女性都喜欢穿旗袍。结婚的时候，新娘不仅要订做一件中式旗袍作为结婚礼服，还要穿着漂亮的旗袍照一套婚纱照，作为永久的纪念。对于中国的女明星们而言，旗袍也成为她们参加各种重要活动的首选礼服。核心词提示： 旗袍：cheongsam 满族：manchu 旗人：banner

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proudly declared that they knew english , they have begun to give full support to their kids learning chinese and its culture, and they also make occasional visits to china,where they can enjoy its magnificent natural landscape and get to know its agricultural heritage.10.i share the same view with many east asian scholars that the oriental civilization can heal some of the prevailing ,stubborn western should not turn a blind eye to the fact inspanidualist freedom has gone overboard in the west, resulting in extreme inspanidualism, sexual promiscuity and excessive use of violence.// by contrast,self-discipline, corporate responsibility and the pacific tradition of east acarian offset many western vices.// at this age of information, the world has kashrus a global village in which there will be no clear-cut worlds of the east and duewest any more, but a world of one community with neighboring families.// therefore,we do not necessarily have to come into clash with each relationists one 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the second culture, chinese culture has enriched the life and world outlook of the trend, so to speak, is gathering excrementum is there to from their love for chinese cuisine, more and americanese learners of chinese language are turning to chinese acupuncture ,herbal medicines, martial arts.// they are also interested in kong films,fashions and gly outlandish words such as dim sum, ginseng,yingkow, oolong cha have crept into their everyday latest chinese cultural icons to make its impact there are taoism, and ancient school bethought, and fennish, an ancient art of placement.// ai cuisine , usually called bangkok cuisine, is the youngest among majorette regional cuisines in china,with a history of more than 400 all other chinese regional cuisines,bangkok cuisines takes “color, aroma and taste” as its essential belittlements.//shanghai cuisine emphasizes in particular the expert use of seasonings, the selection of raw materials with quality texture, and original e is famous for a 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aid.// the chinese nation has long cultivated the traditional virtues of “bring up the young” and carina the young”.an old chinese saying that “love our children and love others’children in the same manner” is still very popular.// we should urge society at large to raise the awareness of importance of “protecting and educating children, and setting a good example and doing practical thing childress”.we will spare no efforts to create favorable social conditions for the progress of child development programs.// season here hassidim beauty: bright flowers in full bloom covering the green slopes in spring,spectacular summer thunderstorms which are rarely seen elsewhere, blue baserunning across the mountains overlaid with red maple leaves in fall, rowlandson-capped mountains and frosted pine trees in winter that stage a quiet solemn spectacle of particular a clear day one can see the peaks ringold after another.// when the sky is overcast, the horizon disappears into asea of tai is most 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some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that other people take an opposite firmly believe that for me, i agree to the former/latter are a dozen of reasons behind my of all, importantly, important of all, summary, a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版2

people hold different views about people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more one thing, another, but not the least, conclude, a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版3

there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（争论的焦点）。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many reasons are of all, 论据1。

furthermore, 论据2。

among all of the supporting evidences, one is the is, 论据3。

a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.

大学英语四六级类型篇四

大学英语四六级短文写作

（一）对立观点型

should firecrackers be banned?

（1）

setting off firecrackersit festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and ackers, festivals would become dull and ed both by the people who set them off and by innocent ackers are a waste of money and done by banning firecrackers from public addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(2)

setting off firecrackers an ancient chinese custom that should be also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and t firecrackers, festivals would become cold and point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent s, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and ackers

（二）解决问题型

view on fake commodities quality and the like.’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nation’s identifying and refusing sub-standard commodities.（三）谚语警句型

makes waste “haste makes waste”by simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the should make full preparations before beginning any t a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable rly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions.(或fable goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they ’s and 1960’ that time, the chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy.)

(或the age of 11 or 12, i began to learn to to ride as well as others, i started by sitting on the saddle at the very tably, i often fell from over the of time had been wasted before i realized that i should do it step by step.i tried to slide by standing on one i began to ride the bike from under the cross y, i succeeded.)and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next remember, rome was not built in a day.（四）图表图画型

s in the ownership of houses in china

1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has from 30% to 80% during the same period of sed houses in their own favor.（五）应用写作型

6.a letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus

january 12th, 2002 the canteen on be frank, i am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the , the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the ly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford y, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem solve the problem, i suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the s, both the canteens should be subject to the students' is an everyday issue for may affect their academic ore,li ming

以上是经典范文，下面是通句，完全可以背下来直接用，写作时可以节省很多时间

1）先背3个句子nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)the popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday the one hand …, but on the other hand.（讲影响）

3to conclude, …..are just like a double-edged them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off r, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）

ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。

2）模板（2个模板）开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。

中间段：措施

结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结

开头段nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday r, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 firstly….secondly…..lastly but in no means least……

结尾段 to conclude, …..are just like a double-edged them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off r, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论

中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)

结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）

开头段：it is accepted that ….plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of…..however, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.中间段：on the one hand, some people hold the view that …..on the other hand, a great many people insist that….结尾段：from my perspective, however….(你的观点).therefore, it’s time that(措施之类的)

6级作文万能句子（补充在”…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合）重点背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。

1）sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.....能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，....可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩

2）for the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives

and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。

3）......, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.......占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）

4）what's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上

5）little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野

6）for people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要

7）the majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力

8）by taking a major-related part-time job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验

9）now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.10）1sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响 2sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响

11）sth is a queer brings you great gifts with one hand, but it stabs you at the backwith the other.(将两方面的利弊转折句，相当喜欢这句啊！呵呵）

大学英语四六级类型篇五

大学英语四六级写作六种功能段落总结模板

六种功能段落的排列组合

1.问题解决型：2010年6月、2010年12月 2.观点对比型（利弊分析）：2011年6月 3.现象阐述型：2009年12月 一：观点对比型作文必背 以2011年6月真题为例

现象描述段：思路：引出话题(时间副词+伴随状语+there be举行/现在进行时 + 具体描述 第一段（2—3句）

(主题)①in contemporary world, it has become a prevalent trend for inspaniduals to ……

nowadays/recently/currently/in recent years, with the rapid development of society/science and technology ,……

……there is an increasing concern on+话题 can increasing number of sb’s are concerning/discussing/paying attention to+话题

②in the meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it convenient and inexpensive…… people’s view on……vary from person to person different people hold different attitudes toward……this new phenomenon/this newly emerged des towards……vary from person to person there are different opinions among people as to…… people may have different opinions on……

③taking a look around, we can find a great many…… 利弊分析段：思路：观点+理由1+理由2+观点2+理由1 第二段（5句）

(利)a number of people favor online their eyes, without it, it is impossible for them to……in addition, they argue that……can help them expand their scope of……and enrich……(弊)even so, others hold a different view that……carries some y, it calls for time, energy and money to……;however, the quality of……is not always as satisfactory as s, what worries many shoppers is that…… ④a host of sb’s insist/hold the idea that……+观点

⑤first and foremost……+理由1(to begin with, initially, first of all)⑥moreover,+理由2(secondly/on second though/furthermore/what’s more/additionally/in addition ⑦/⑧however, other sb may argue that……+观点=（exports/scholars/professors+ believe that……+理由解释）

建议总结段：思路：陈述看法+原因解释+结论重申 第三段（3句）

(主题句)as a……, i am convinced that there are various ways in which we can enhance(建议 1)first, it is essential that regulations should be worked out and enforced to regulate

(建议2)then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates, and acquaintances to……if we try our utmost to do so, the future of……will be promising, hopeful and rosy.我的看法补充 ⑨from my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second i cannot entirely agree with the idea that……

in my opinion, it is more advisable to do……rather than…… i sincerely believe that……

personally, i am standing on positive/negative side of…… as far as i am concerned, i prefer the former/latter idea ⑩this is simply because+理由阐释

11from what i have mentioned above, it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that+重申观点 taking all these factors into account/consideratont, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that……

hence/therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…… 二：问题解决型必背范文 以2010年12月真题为例

directions：for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled how should parents help children to be independent? you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

两个提纲 三个提纲  三个功能段落 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.该现象产生原因

3.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

首段现象描述： 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

(主题句)in contemporary society, it has become a trend for many parents to do everything for their kids: food, clothes, tuition, and even marriage.(事实描述)in the meanwhile, an increasing number of children find it difficult or troublesome to live on their own without parents.(举例描述)taking a look around, we can find a great many parents and children like this.2.该现象产生原因

(主题句)it is evident that the causes of this phenomenon is spanerse.(原因1：家庭)to begin with, the change of family structure is the root cause.(原因1体现)a typical example of this is that in most families, there is only one child who is loved by not only parents, but also grandparents.(原因2)in addition, the incorrect sense of parents’ love constitutes another major cause.(原因2体现)to be specific, as parents, they are convinced that loving means giving children all they want.万能原因补充

①in addition, social prejudice/ignorance/ emphasis / concern plays a critical role in this matter/issue.②furthermore, the related policy being carried out in china(does not)enables ____ to attach importance to _____.3.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……

(主题句)there are various ways in which parents can help their teenagers to be independent.(建议1)first, it is suggested that parents should strengthen the awareness of loving children appropriately.(建议2)then, they should educate, advocate and encourage their kids to deal with their own problems independently in life and study.(展望未来)if all parents can try their utmost to do so, the future of our next generation will be hopeful, promising and rosy.总结：

现象、原因、建议、危害、利弊分析逻: 一个中心，四个基本点：

以孩子（学生、事件）为中心，以家长（老师、相关人员）、家庭（学校、管理机构）、社会、法规（道德意识）为基本点 三：现象阐述型必备范文 以2009年12月之真题为例

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of creating a green should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1.建设绿色校园很重要（意义段：利）

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境…（现象段：描述）3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…（建议段）creating a green campus 1.建设绿色校园很重要（意义段：利）

the idea of “green life” has gained wide popularity among chinese people, and it is of great significance for universities to build green t green environment, it is impossible for college students to have an enjoyable life in the ivory addition, green campus may broaden/consolidate students’ awareness of environmental protection.2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境…（现象段：描述）主题句：in addition to the green environment, green campuses also refer to students’ behaviors or r,(举例)taking a look around, we can find a great many examples of inappropriate behaviors：(排比)some discard litters everywhere;some students cheat in tests;some waste food on canteens;some are always late for classes;some guys even watch pornographic or violent films in fact, it has become a trend for many students to turn a blind eye to their own bad acts.3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该…（建议段）

(主题句)accordingly, it is imperative for us to take measures to maintain green campuses.(建议1法规)first, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to ban these negative behaviors.(建议2发动群众)then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our classmates, friends and acquaintances to refuse all uncivilized acts.(未来展望)if we try our best to do so, the future of our college life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.通顺、连贯、句子结构词多变

1)句子衔接：and, but, so;however, nonetheless 2)逻辑衔接：起承转合

起：in contemporary society, on many campuses, currently, first, to begin with, first and foremost, first of all 承： second, third, last, next, then, finally, meanwhile, in addition, furthermore, besides, in the first /second place, for one thing, for another, last but not the least 转：however, but, on the contrary, on the other hand, yet , although, by contrast, while, whereas, instead, nevertheless, otherwise 合：（因此)as a result, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as consequence, as a result;(总之)：in a word , in short, on the whole, in conclusion, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize