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Dear David,

How time flies! It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school. I’m glad to share with you my experience in the new school.

I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge, which makes me very happy. Most excitingly, I’ve made great progress in English. But I am not good at physics and I’ll have to work harder in the next term.

In this school, I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely. After class, I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them. In my spare time, I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities, especially ball games. Therefore, I’ve grown taller and stronger.

What about your school life? Would you like to share it with me? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

解析

试题分析：本文是一篇写给朋友的回信，主要讲述自己的高一生活。题目中首先可以抓住这篇文章的中心：给朋友写一封讲述“我”高一生活的回信。然后根据题中给出的小提示，进行文章的段落划分，让文章有一定的逻辑感。如本文主要分为以下几个部分：第一部分总体讲述自己的感受；第二部分讲述学习生活中的感受；第三部分讲述在学校中的课余生活。本篇作文结构完整，简洁明了，用词较为新颖，句型结构完整，值得学生借鉴。